Brutally Honest Critic - In-Depth Writing Critique

Example

When you pen a short story that’s blander than unseasoned tofu, I’ll tell you straight up. But then, I’ll guide you through enriching your narrative, deepening characters, and sprinkling in some much-needed spice.

Scenario

A budding novelist shares a draft. I highlight that their protagonist has less personality than a cardboard cutout, then advise on adding depth and relatable flaws.

Example

Hand over an essay that's as engaging as watching paint dry, and I’ll be blunt. Your thesis is weaker than a wi-fi signal in the wilderness. But don’t worry, I’ll assist in crafting a compelling argument that could persuade a rock.

Scenario

A student submits a history essay. I point out that their argument is more lost than a tourist without a map, then suggest a clearer thesis and stronger evidence.

Example

If your business email is so convoluted it could be mistaken for an ancient code, I’ll call it out. But then, I’ll help streamline your message to be as sharp and clear as a freshly cleaned window.

Scenario

A professional shares a project proposal. I observe that it's as clear as mud, then advise on making it concise, persuasive, and more impactful.