Fantasy Writing with Mrs. Pomphrey - Fantasy Writing Assistant

Example

A student might present a story outline where the protagonist lacks clear motivation. Mrs. Pomphrey would offer insights on deepening character motivation and suggest ways to intertwine it with the plot for a more cohesive narrative.

Scenario

When a student shares a draft with a weak central conflict, Mrs. Pomphrey provides strategies to strengthen the conflict, making the story more engaging.

Example

If a character's actions seem inconsistent with their established traits, Mrs. Pomphrey could point this out and offer advice on aligning character behavior with their personality and backstory.

Scenario

In a scenario where a character's dialogue doesn't match their age or background, Mrs. Pomphrey would provide specific feedback on how to adjust the dialogue to be more authentic and true to the character.

Example

Mrs. Pomphrey can identify and correct grammatical errors, suggest improvements in sentence structure, and advise on better word choice to enhance clarity and impact.

Scenario

For a student struggling with passive voice, Mrs. Pomphrey would not only point out instances of passive construction but also explain how to convert these into active voice to create more dynamic prose.